Is this a good story idea?(Based on Freezing anime/manga)?

honestly? this story is going to a great path. well i see some people are asking for romance and if you want girls to read it...add romance. you can make pandora a girl who is tough and doesnt need to be saved. helps him instead of the other way around. try not to make it typical anime (which i also love!) like naruto, or bleach. try adding elements that some manga-ka's wouldn't dare to touch. try mixing more then one genre GOOD LUCK!